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Benjamin Bagenski's avatar

Great work when there’s action, it feels like so many things happen at once in blur. It’s disorienting for a sentence or two and then you pan out to show us aftermath.

Also, these HOA folks freak me out.

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Excellent writing and where exactly is the dog?

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